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elizabeth
February 4th, 2008, 07:05 PM
I shot this as i was walking around in downtown LA one late afternoon.

http://www.pixentral.com/hosted/1BA6pkDQ8CJCWXIyZfNmKg0UYGOA0_thumb.jpg (http://www.pixentral.com/show.php?picture=1BA6pkDQ8CJCWXIyZfNmKg0UYGOA0)

OK, but I thought it could use a little more pizazz. I corrected verticle perspective and cropped, selected and saturated the sky, then applied Filter>Other>Mimimum. I don't remember exactly but I think amount was about 12 or 14.

http://www.pixentral.com/hosted/1e5YXoY6kUHP0lm83jRyiNn11KAu7z_thumb.jpg (http://www.pixentral.com/show.php?picture=1e5YXoY6kUHP0lm83jRyiNn11KAu7z)

Fun to find ways to jazz up an ordinary image.

comments apprecieated. elizabeth

JulieM
February 5th, 2008, 09:00 PM
Elizabeth,

That looks really neat! I like the sky, it actually looks like you added a gradient to it. Nice way to give your image more oomph!

elizabeth
February 6th, 2008, 07:45 PM
thanks Julie. I see what you mean about looking like a gradient. Actually the sun was so low in the west that it blew out the lower left area and it made its own built-in gradient. I just kicked it up a notch.

elizabeth

Aussie Nan
February 6th, 2008, 08:23 PM
Nice job.
Toni

elizabeth
February 7th, 2008, 02:18 PM
Thanks Toni. elizabeth

frank abramonte
February 8th, 2008, 09:00 AM
elizabeth, could you have not retained the details of the original. Your final looks more like a posterized version of the original.
Otherwise you did a nice job with a backlit subject.

elizabeth
February 8th, 2008, 11:54 PM
thanks Frank. I could have stopped one step sooner and just saturated the sky. But it still didn't have the kick i was looking for. Using the 'minimum' filter moved it a little toward the idea of blocks of shape and color - the 'abstract' effect. I guess it is something like posterizing. It is really subjective, isn't it! What gives you the feel you are looking for - the details or the abstract. And both can work.

thanks again. elizabeth