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nkeevers
November 26th, 2006, 10:38 AM
Well, I'm trying this again. Didn't end up liking the rose so tried something else.

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msbrad
November 26th, 2006, 10:44 AM
Morning,
I think it is great. I also liked the rose.
My suggestion is to stay with the one that makes you smile most.:)
m

nkeevers
November 26th, 2006, 11:06 AM
Thanks. My dad wrote the poem on plain paper so anything other than that is an improvement to him.:D

I had a nicer rose but didn't know where to put it. It looked like too much with the flowers in the corners so I ditched it. I'm sure they'll be happy with this one.

karen donnybrook
November 26th, 2006, 04:05 PM
Norma,

I think you have a great layout now - well done.

Karen :)

nkeevers
November 26th, 2006, 04:17 PM
Thanks Karen!